Feedback from our own class

-Missing shots worked well
-Photoframe shot was good when it was still then started moving
-Police sirens/radios were good and the statistics spoken
-One of our titles was 'Based on a true story' - different and effective
-Pretty clear what it is about
-Laughing at the beginning abit too unclear and maybe too much of it
-More like a trailer - with loads of bits and pieces involved
-Could have not as much stuff in it
-Narration needs to be cut out