Rough cut

Postive Feedback - Good props, convict board was good, map was good, good in the forest, the screen was good, picture frame close up was a very good idea, pictures at the beginning was good, good panning shot, good steady shots, scream at end was good.
Negative Feedback - Frame shot needs work, isn't properly in order yet, picture in frame needs to be longer, steadier shots, dark/fuzzy at the start, shorts are too quick, not clear at the beginning, could cause confusion or epilepsy, sound was jumpy needs work. props and costumes are unsuitable, narrative bit unclear.