'36' student thriller

Rachel and Leanne
The music (piano) becomes diagetic. the close up of the hands is effective, shows you who is playing it and that it is their own original music used.
The story line is really clear but is left with a cliff hanger and the thought.."Why has she been shot? Who has shot her?" The effects used in the dancing shot are really effective, we would like to develop a few ideas used for our own thriller sequence. The bus shots didnt fit in with the story line maybe they could have shown more of the killer/piano player? The light at the end was a bit out of time with the shooting sound. The contrast between the beginning and the end of the sequence is shown by the music suddenly changing from calm piano to a deep heartbeat sound which we think worked really well.